Sunday, January 20, 2019

Blog #9 (1/20/19) 

A Day in the Life of an Ancient Egyptian Doctor:

The Ted Talk I chose was very unique from most that I have previously seen. It was solely an animation, the story was told through this animation, while addressing the main idea that not everything in life can be fixed but you can learn from your experiences. The story revolves around one main character, a doctor, named Peseshet. It follows her in her day to day activities, hence the title "A day in the life." Although she is a doctor, she also has the job of teaching adolescent children in the ways of becoming a scribe. When the story first unfolds, the audience learns that Peseshet is on her way to the House of Life, which is where she teaches at. Before she can be on her way to that, though, she has a stop to make. One of the workers in the town had shattered the bone in his arm and she was asked to help in the healing process. Peseshet stabilizes the arm and is then on her way. Before she could make it to the House of Life, she was stopped by a woman in the street who's son had been stung by a scorpion. Peseshet utters a spell and then cuts out the poison. She finally arrives at the House of Life and teaches her class. When she leaves, she is approached by another woman. This woman has a large lump in her arm. Peseshet had read hundreds of texts and knew there was nothing she could do for the woman and had to deliver the bad news.

Although the summary I provided above goes in chronological order of what happened throughout the video, I think that the importance is maintained throughout. The author is a strategist. By starting with the seemingly important encounters that Peseshet has with patients, it helps the audience to understand the reliability everyone places upon her. By utilizing the logistics behind medicine, the audience can relate to everything that is happening, making the video both increasingly more intriguing and also relatable. Pathos was the dominant technique used by the author. When hearing anything about other people suffering from injuries, it triggers an emotional response. The author of this Ted Talk made a point to include many techniques to strengthen their point they strove to drive into the audience's brain. This could be because they had been through an event in life that triggered them to change their outlook, or simply because they wished to empower the members of the audience.

I also found it interesting the way that the author chose to tell the story. I know that I already touched on the animation but I wanted to go more in depth into the significance of it. Most Ted Talks consist of a speaker, or sometimes multiple, that stand in front of a group of people and tell their story. By using an animation, it starts out seeming less personal, but to me, it was more interesting. Being able to see the story unfold is what draws the audience in. I think the author did this on purpose. I believe that the author thought that his story would be best told through an animation, rather than him or her standing in front of an audience. And I think this was the right choice. Imagine this story being told to you by a single person, it would honestly be kind of boring. By showing the hypothetical story unfold, with more hypothetical characters, it actually helps the story become more personable.

The plot twist at the ending was very sad and made me, personally, realize that life is full of surprises. You cannot help everything that happens in life but it will continue to go on. It is similar to the saying about learning from your mistakes. You have to learn from the events in life that you cannot change. One would assume that the lump in the woman's arm is presumably cancerous. I had a close family friend that had a lump in her breast and it turned out to be cancer. It was heartbreaking and horrible to watch her go through the therapy and all of the pain that is caused. So anytime cancer could be a possibility it becomes an instant emotional trigger for me.

I originally chose to watch this Ted Talk because I saw that it included animation, different then all other Ted Talks I have watched, so I became intrigued to find out what it was about. When reading that this blog post was to focus on story telling, I thought it would be different to analyze something that was not one person talking directly at the audience. Little did I know that a simple animation could tell a story that would go way beyond the concept of a doctor helping a patient. It helped me to realize that life is full of things that you cannot control. This was the simple message brought about by the story being told. There is deeper meaning that I interpreted, that because life can throw so many surprises at you and that you cannot fix everything, you have to live life to the fullest. A simple lump in your arm can lead to your death. A simple car ride to school can change everything. There were so many messages that I gain from this Ted Talk. I know I have already stated many of them, and even though this part is not required, I wanted to list them below.
  • Live life to the fullest: It can all end in one moment 
  • Learn from your experiences: Mistakes, unexpected events, they will all help you grow 
  • Made good choices: Although life can change instantly, do not make choices that will make the unexpected evermore increasing 
The author of this story did an amazing job telling a story that offered a meaningful concept but also left much interpretation open to the audience. I know that what I felt the story meant is not the exact same as what someone else could, so I encourage everyone to take 5 minutes of their time and watch this Ted Talk. 


Sunday, January 6, 2019

Blog #8 (1/6/19)

In this blog post, I will be analyzing, by means of comparing and contrasting, how Mr. Hyde and Dr. Jekyll are portrayed. This will be done by looking into a section from chapter 1 ("He is not easy to describe...I really can name nothing out of the way") and a section from chapter 3 ("To this rule...This is a matter I thought we had agreed to drop").

*WARNING: POTENTAIL SPOLIERS*
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In chapter 1, Mr. Hyde is described as someone 'not easy to describe'. Mr. Enfield and Mr. Utterson were having a conversation with one another while walking one day. Mr. Utterson is listening to a story Mr. Enfield is telling him about a man named Mr. Hyde. Well... I don't know if 'telling' is the right word to use. Mr. Enfield seemed to be at a loss for words when it comes to explaining the personality of Mr. Hyde to Mr. Utterson. This section shows that Mr. Hyde is such an awful person that it is almost indescribable. It also seems like Mr. Hyde is so horrible that it almost encapsulates a person when they speak of him. Mr. Enfield stated, "He's an extraordinary-looking man, and yet I really can name nothing out of the way." My take of this is that the tone drastically shifts as Enfield continues to describe Hyde, almost as if he began to get sort of scared of him. Hyde's appearance was also bashed and described as "deformed". This excerpt from chapter 1 basically portrays Mr. Hyde as an indescribable monster.

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The excerpt from chapter 3 makes it seem as if Dr. Jekyll is the seemingly perfect man. He is said to be, "a large, well-made, smooth-faced man." He seems very positive and well liked by many people. The tone of this description is much different from that of Mr. Hyde because it is much more happy and uplifting rather than degrading and harsh. Dr. Jekyll seems to have a good connection with people which is different from that of Mr. Hyde, who seems to stray away from using his people skills. This description sounded as if it was almost delighted to have been given. However, Hyde and Jekyll do have one similarity from these to excerpts. 

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They both have a 'sly' sort of sense to their personalities, as if they are always hiding something. This is very ironic seeing as how they are actually the same person. Mr. Hyde is just another form of Jekyll, created by Jekyll, in order to portray his bad intentions in a way that would not damage his appearance. This is an example of the theme of appearance vs. reality which we have talked much about in class. Dr. Jekyll appears to be just an average, good looking man, but he is actually a mad scientist who transforms in order to prevent himself from having any sort of negative qualities. 

The poem I wrote is about each Mr. Hyde and Dr. Jekyll but how each one thinks when he is in his 'form'. As the poem progresses, similar to when the book progressed, you will begin to see the realization in both characters that this cannot go on for much longer. This will also show the idea of appearance vs reality and will also touch on the concept of duality of men. Lines spoken from Mr. Hyde will be underlined, lines from Jekyll will be bolded and lines that they shared will be in italics. 

Not Fit for Two 

I am a doctor 
I am a killer
I am respected 
I am hated
But I have yearnings
These cannot be seen
They are shown without thought
Public opinion is always about
Who even is public? 
Saving lives is my passion
Hurting souls is my obsession
It has all gone wrong
Wrong is the new right
This has to stop
I kill people without a fright 
What have I become? 

*This poem was literally the worst thing I have ever written so I apologize to anyone who reads this. I am really tired and this sounded so much better in my head:(*